ONE UPON A TIME THERE WERE A CINDERELLA WITH STEP MOTHER AND TWO STEP SISTERS IN THE CASTLE. CINDERELLA HAVE FOUR LITTLE MICE BUT STEP MOTHER AND TWO STEP SISTERS HAVE BIG CAT. CINDERELLA IS MAID SO FOUR LITTLE MICE HELP CINDERELLA. ONE DAY CINDERELLA GOT MESSGE SO CINDERELLA SHOW TO STEP MOTHER AND STEP SISTERS AND STEP MOTHER SAID'' IF YOU WANT TO GO YOU MUST TIDY UP ALL OF THIS SO AFTHER CINDERELLA FINISH TIDY UP CINDERELLA A BEUTIFUL CLOTHE SO SHE SHOW TO HER STEP MOTHER THIS IS BEUTIFUL CLOTHE. BUT YOU CANNOT FOLLOW ME. SO SHE CRY AND CRY AFTER THAT THE FAIRY COME AND CINDERELLA STOP CRYING AND THE FAIRY SAID'' I CAN HELP YOU BUT ONE MORE THING YOU MUST GO BACK AT 12:00 AND CINDERELLA SAID'' OKEY. SO CINDERELLA CAN GO TO SHOW WITH PUMPKIN CAR AFTHER THAT THE KING SAW A CINDERELLA SO HE DANCE WITH KING TO 12:00 AFTER THAT CINDERELLA RANBUT ONE CINDERELLA SLIPPER AT STEP SO SHE RAN AND RAN SO AFTER THAT THE KING SAW CINDERELLA SLIPPER AND HE TAKE THAT SLIPPER SO THE KING TRY AVEREY PEOPLE SO HE GOES TO CINDERELLA HOUSE SO HE TRY CINDERELLA SLIPPER AND CINDERELLA CAN WEAC THAT SLEPPER AND SHE WIDDING WITH THAT KING.
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Mizah, buat cerita banyak-banyak ye. Salah takpe, ada masa ibu & abah betulkan nanti ye. Belajar guna komputer dan tingkatkan kemahiran menulis.
Ni kakak Mizah yang karang je copy dari buku?....He he he....
kakak buat sendiri..sebab tu banyak salah
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